Angel & Wes

[zanthinegirl.livejournal.com]

Sorry to be so spammy, but I have another request! 

It's Wes thinking about Angel, set after the MOG have taken over Wolfram & Hart.  Wes is commenting (possibly internally?  Maybe to Harmony?) that Angel had been told that comas are used in writing where there would be pauses in speech.  Now Angel writes many long, complicated, run on sentences.

It's just a short scene in a longer fic, but it's really bugging me that I can't remember the source.

Any suggestions are appreciated!

ETA: Found!  It's actually Harmony rather than Wes.  Long Day's Journey by anaross.

Thanks so much fenchurche!

Comments

[fenchurche.livejournal.com]

Oh! That's actually a Harmony scene... where she's commenting on the comma thing. In "Long Day's Journey" (http://www.livejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=anaross&keyword=Journey&filter=all) by anaross.

ETA: That bit shows up in Chapter 8, BTW. It could also be in another story, but it's definitely in that one!

[zanthinegirl.livejournal.com]

Oh, of course it is! And I love that story and have read it several times. Doh!